Wednesday, November 14, 2012

NIGHTMARE NIGHT






It was a dark and rainy night. At 11 o’clock, Elisa who had been working until 22:00 was living alone because she had divorced 2 weeks ago. When she arrived home, she drank a bit of water and she ate a sandwich of cheese and ham. When she saw that her black cat “ Angus “ didn’t want to be with her, she realised the bad smell that she had, so, quickly she went to the shower. When she was inside, she heard a noise, but she thought that it was Angus so she wasn’t worried. But two minutes later she saw a shadow in the corridor.

She started to feel worried, who could be behind that shadow? Without time to think,  one man’s head appeared from the curtain. It was her ex husband! Elisa was shocked, she could see in David’s eyes that he was really angry with her, but it wasn’t just a feeling of anger, he looked like if he wanted a revenge. She looked at David, she saw a huge knife in his hand, was he going to kill her?

David looked at her with a devilish smile, he laughed like a mad and he said “If I were you I’d start running”, and he started laughing again. Instantly, Elisa screamed and obeying David, she ran as fast as she could. Suddenly, she fell down, she had crashed Angus. As a consequence, David caught Elisa. She was going to die, but surprisingly, her neighbour George appeared behind David with a pan, he had heard the scream. But when David saw him, he threw his big knife, it impacted in his face and he died in a sea of blood.

Elisa was shocked. She had never seen anything like that in David before. He was totally mad! Suddenly, she started crying when David stood up. He laughed again and he took his knife from George’s face. He looked at Elisa with a devilish smile and he said that he would kill her painfully and torturing her without piety. He came near her and he tied her to a bed. Elisa couldn’t shout because she had a scarf in her mouth.     

    Then, David went to the kitchen to see if the neighbor was dead, and meanwhile she was trying to get free from the tape of the mouth and the ropes of her hands. The house was very dark but she could see the knife of the table with the moonlight, she took it and cut the ropes that were holding her strongly and she came untied. Suddenly, she went to attack him David, but he was already killed on the floor and her neighbor was alive with another big knife in the other side of the face, and she shouted and ran to call the police.

    George took Elisa and said to her: “The police its going to arrest me because I have killed  David so I’ll go to prison. But I’m not going to leave you as if nothing has happened. I’m going to finish David’s work. Hahahahaha!”. She was terrified and she tried to escape but George was very strong and he held Elisa very hard. He took the big knife and stabbed Elisa many times until she stopped shouting. He let the killed body on the bathroom with the knife in it and he escaped from the balcony.

To create this fantastic story have been very important the colavoraion of my clasemates. Hear other soryes of my klasmaters.


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